On Monday we had to make a piece of descriptive writing we had to include adjectives it was not that hard though.I enjoyed trying to figure out what to put next.I think next time I could try to add some more writing.
This is a great piece of descriptive writing. You have made a great job of your writing. Alma is a really interesting curious little girl. I thought the video started out quite happy but had a really sad ending. Next time Jaci, just check that it is able to be read clearly before you post to your blog. So that it is easy for people to read your work.
Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Hi Jaci
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This is a great piece of descriptive writing. You have made a great job of your writing.
Alma is a really interesting curious little girl. I thought the video started out quite happy but had a really sad ending.
Next time Jaci, just check that it is able to be read clearly before you post to your blog. So that it is easy for people to read your work.
Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)